Discussion of "Morning Sunrise" by ARNG19D

Brings back memories of my daughters 1st day of school. She did not want me out of her sight. Like most first timers she cried like hell. It crushed me to leave her, but she eventually manged well.

Another one of those monumental "firsts" in life. It seems we parents chronicle our children's lives by these stepping stones. It's hard to let them go, almost feels that with every new memory brings them closer to leaving. Thank you for sharing your experience. I'm glad this could bring back that memory for you.

daughter's...(one not two).

Lol, very nice chapter. I am curious to hear how the rest of the story goes. :)

Thank you, I'll be working on getting the next one up soon. I'm glad you liked it.

Another excellent piece, ARNG...;o). You're very good with dialogue and this was exceptionally well done...very natural, very real.

Thanks writerwannabe :)

Amazing work! You really put feeling into your work and care. You should be proud :)

This was touching and true to life. Well written. You have me curious how the first day will turn out for her.

Your dialogue has an authentic sound to it that makes it an enjoyable read.