Discussion of "I Can't Write" by ARNG19D

Now this is a great example of jumping in with both feet. I especially enjoyed the pre-story monologue. I think the author's voice can continue to be part of the story...in a 'Princess Bride' sorta way. Kudos on creativity. Welcome to SM, Arnie.

Thank you very much. I was hoping to capture that story telling effect. I wanted to write something that after I read it I wanted to see where the story would go. I'm looking forward to seeing what others come up with.

You might be wondering how I'm able to read and comment, one of your stories after the other, so quickly....then, again, maybe not. It's because I read them all before I started commenting...lol.

As alharris mentioned, the pre-story monologue was great and the story, itself, has started out strong. Good job!

lol I was getting a little curious. Thank you, I've been working on a few ideas. Trying to make it a little more organized with character names, relationships, how things will work in this fantasy world. I have high expectations with this, I love writing fantasy. Thaks again for the comments.

Reading this helped me brake my writers block, thank you. When I reached the end of the tale I wished for more, maybe if you end up with a small bout of writers block you might continue it?

Hope to see more