Discussion of "Cowboys Can't Ride" by ARNG19D
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alharris 1 year, 10 months ago
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Great dialogue! |
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ARNG19D 1 year, 10 months ago
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Thank you. My girl inspired this. Early on in our relationship we would have conversations similar to this. Even to this day she still teases me about being a cowboy. Thank you for your comment. I'm hoping to get the next chapter stated soon. |
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writerwannabe 1 year, 10 months ago
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Really well done. It's hard to write a complete chapter using 80% dialogue, but you made it look easy! |
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ARNG19D 1 year, 10 months ago
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Thank you. Though I wish I could add a little more too them. I've noticed all my chapters so far are really short. So I've decided on trying to make them longer. The conversation part was easier but I wish I had brought more depth in. Though I worry too much about being too detailed. Thanks again for your comments and input. |
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