Thank you. Though I wish I could add a little more too them. I've noticed all my chapters so far are really short. So I've decided on trying to make them longer. The conversation part was easier but I wish I had brought more depth in. Though I worry too much about being too detailed. Thanks again for your comments and input.

Thanks writerwannabe :)

lol I was getting a little curious. Thank you, I've been working on a few ideas. Trying to make it a little more organized with character names, relationships, how things will work in this fantasy world. I have high expectations with this, I love writing fantasy. Thaks again for the comments.

Thanks again for your input. I too felt that the transition was a little sudden. I seriously censored it. In my experience cussing was normal, but I'm afraid I sacrificed the realism aspect of it too much. I'm still unfamiliar with the language rules on SM. I'll make sure to do a little research on that. Thanks again.

Yes you are correct. My name does stand for that so you're right on the money there. Thanks for your input. I agree with you about NCO's. I used real life people for reference, though I should mention that he is the only NCO in the platoon who did things like that. He wasn't too good dealing with the emotional side of things. Other than that he was an excellent leader whom I have great respect for. I do understand your take on it and I shall keep it in mind for future chapters. I'll be sure to check out your chapters as well, thanks again for you comments.

Hi hun. I know I may like this story more than others will. I have a closer connection to it. Just wanted to let you know I liked it, I enjoy being able to see things from your point of view. There are a few errors but I love it regardless. I really hope you write more, don't let it end here I want to see what happens next! I love you, talk to you soon.

Thank you. My girl inspired this. Early on in our relationship we would have conversations similar to this. Even to this day she still teases me about being a cowboy. Thank you for your comment. I'm hoping to get the next chapter stated soon.

Thank you, I'll be working on getting the next one up soon. I'm glad you liked it.

Another one of those monumental "firsts" in life. It seems we parents chronicle our children's lives by these stepping stones. It's hard to let them go, almost feels that with every new memory brings them closer to leaving. Thank you for sharing your experience. I'm glad this could bring back that memory for you.

Thank you very much. I was hoping to capture that story telling effect. I wanted to write something that after I read it I wanted to see where the story would go. I'm looking forward to seeing what others come up with.