Discussion of "LoveQuest_101" by AJ2007

Nice start here. You introduce the characters well and keep it interesting enough to make me want to know what happens next.

Hey..thanks a ton!..I really appreciaten your input. Honestely, I had a lot more when I went to submit, but didn't realize I was limited character wise. I ended up having to cut quite a lot and was afraid it wouldn't have the same feel I wanted. Soon as I can, I'd love to see your work as well..it's nice to have people to share with.

okay ... now I want to know more... will there be more???

Hey, Champagne...thanks a ton...and yes, I plan on adding more...hope to see you around:)

hey that was prety good got me guessing what's next good job

Thanks, Hyjones!..I appreciate the comments...hope we can share again soon:)

This story really kept my attention, and I get bored and distracted very easily when reading. Great start! I hope for the continuation soon! I feel like Jared might turn out to be shady...???

Hey, Jaeden...I appreciate your comments too...and that meant alot, I get distracted easily too...and I hope I can maintain reader interest with the next chapters:)

I love your story so far! :) it definatley kept my interest..now we need you to write the rest of it..

Hey, Kay..thanks a ton!...I'll definately be working on some more chapters..have the second one brewing as we speak:)

A very solid piece. Agree with everything everyone said and then some. Only thing: I don't like the title at all. I wouldn't change anything about it and believe me, I ALWAYS find something that should change.

Although it looks like you already know where you want this to go, I would love to try adding to it if you ever get stuck, so let me know if you do.

Hey, Nate....thank you very much for your comment, I appreciate your critique...sorry I've been awhile in replying...I've got a few ideas as to where to take the story next but haven't made a decision yet...I do appreciate you offer of help though...may take you up on that sometime...and hey, I agree on the title too...lol...I didn't put as much effort into that as I did the story...too bad I can't change it...but oh, well...send me a message sometime:)

Very sweet start, I am hooked so far. I'd love to know where this goes.

Hey, thanks for the vote of confidence...I appreciate the comments...no sure exactly where it's headed, but hoping to get a couple more chapters added soon...hope to hear from you again:)

You hooked me from the beginning. Nice work. And, I think I'm speaking for everyone, where's that next chapter?

Awwwww..thanks...I'm really glad you like it...it's awesome so share here on StoryMash...I'm hoping to get a couple chapters added soon, so pop in and say hi:)