Discussion of "One More Mile" by AJ2007

okay now I wanna know when the next chapter is coming out.... I am hooked

Hey, Champagneblnd_1...I'll do my best to satisy your interest..and thank you sooooo much for you input...it's appreciated more than you know!

Well -- Who is it?? What a great beginning!

Thanks!...I'm glad I've got you guessing...and hope I can keep you guessing awhile longer...thanks for the comments and come back sometime and lemme know what ya think:)

Superb detail ! Could be improved by more emotion.

Thanks a ton, I appreciate your input...I'm hoping to get a couple more chapters out soon and I'll work on getting more emotion into it....come back sometime and lemme know what ya think:)