Discussion of "Precint--Downtown Denver" by AJ2007

Just found this site - so I've just begun to follow this story. You've done a great job here - it's reading just like a detective novel - i'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this! :)

Hi, Mona, and thanks a ton! I really appreciate your input..and welcome to the site, it's an awesome place to share you're work...I hope to see some of your own as well. I hope to get more added to this as soon as I can...and would definately like to develope it as a detective slash thriller...and luckily, I have a detective buddy who can give me some pointers in the future...that'll be awesome...anyway, hope to hear from you again...let me know how your own work is going:)

Not a bad job, I like how you finish the 'detectivity' of the other story. It should spawn some great chapters from it. Kudos.

Thanks a ton, Maurelius...I appreciate your input!...I'm definately hoping to keep the interest up in this story...and I really enjoy hearing from those who enjoy the story:)...hope to hear from you again:)

Just found this site- and this story. I love it. Hope you add more soon.