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Discussion of "The Events of 2/12/08" by A-Lonely_Bush


1 alharris 4 years, 3 months ago Reply

Good story. Welcome to SM. I would have liked to see the story not go by so fast. Losing the brother should have been drawn out a bit, to get more milege out of the horrific tension such a loss would generate. Also, don't be modest. Vote on your own story. I hate the whole voting thing but it dictates how long your story will be on the front page. The system automatically presumes you score yourself high so it starts us all out with a zero. Again, welcome!


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-1 A-Lonely_Bush 4 years, 3 months ago Reply

Thanks, I never really write many stories and yea i agree the part with the brother was kind of awkward. Thanks again for the feedback!


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-1 A-Lonely_Bush 4 years, 3 months ago Reply

Thanks, I never really write many stories and yea i agree the part with the brother was kind of awkward. Thanks again for the feedback!


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