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Discussion of "Speechless 4" by 3rdSunrise

2		writerwannabe 4 years ago Reply Superb writing! I really wished you had continued this...as you seem to have a definite plotline in mind. Perhaps, my comments will stir your muse? I certainly hope so.
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1		hebe6405 4 years ago Reply Bah!!! Write more.
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2		nashvillebecker 4 years ago Reply What I enjoy most is your casual approach to something utterly outrageous. A sociological experiment of mutes sent to a desert with no instructions or directions? Yeah, okay. Doesn't that kind of stuff happen everday? Your tone is consistent; your characters are nicely separated, especially considering you've only granted one a voice. What could be construed as gimmicky has carried you four chapters so far. I wonder how long it can go before wearing thin, but I don't see that happening at all - yet. Like WWB and hebe, I'd be very interested to see where this heads. Keep up the good work.
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2		JD_Renaissance 4 years ago Reply Great story so far. Looking forward to more chapters.
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2		Katrina 4 years ago Reply More, please! Now. I'm hooked.
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2		honeygloom 4 years ago Reply Fantastic ;) I'm brimming with questions that need answers. I echo the others, write more!
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