Discussion of "New me's part 2" by 1992_1115ssjsa
whathedge__feelslike 5 years, 8 months ago
I was following the story pretty good until the last paragraugh...it just seemed to come out of nowhere. She must have had some kind of signifigance to this way of life for the family. Tie her in rather then just having her jump out.
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