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3 nashvillebecker 2 months ago Reply

Since there's still no way to notice new additions to stories without opening them individually and checking, I propose using this forum to announce when you've added chapters to existing storylines. (New stories have their own area; this is the closest I can think of to work with second chapters and beyond.

I added to Le Blog d' Uselessness, also contributed to by Chloe. Feel free to jump in.

Both branches of the Saga series also have new additions - by Cheeseliker, an_doschach, myself, and wolfram.

This topic has the potential to quickly grow to 100 entries; please use it only to announce continuations. (Ideally, another forum area will be created where we can open individual topics for any second chapters.)


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1 cdnwriter1 1 month, 1 week ago Reply

I've added to Vampire Tales2 by vnk9.

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1 cdnwriter1 3 weeks ago Reply

added again to vampire tales. This one is called Fate.
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1 wolfram 2 months ago Reply

Great thread idea, Nash!

I have added a chapter to my story "The Truth About Mr. Dooley", although only in draft form. I am seeking comments prior to publication from those so inclined.


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1 Cheeseliker 2 months ago Reply

I've added to, "When Bad Thing's Taste Good", also finished up my contribution to the October Chill project with, Feasting from Afar finale, Mary (8), and One to Remember(6).


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1 chloe 2 months ago Reply

Great thinking! :) there are so many works in progress:

I added a chapter three to Honeygloom's Love and Bones

another chapter three to The Bank Robbers (someone added a fabulous four!)

and an old one Scidfi (where are you?) and I were batting back and forth called The Painting

also I know its supposed to be "continued only" but I'll be a rebel and see if I could get some feedback on one I started a while back: Midas Uncovered- only as it sort of uses a storymash type setting- although it's a little rough around the edges. off to read! Cheers!
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1 rocklee11416 2 months ago Reply

Yup Nash really great thinking. I just added a chapter to the "I have 30 Days to live" storyline,a chapter three on "When Bad Things Taste Good" and many many more to come...


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1 theblackhand 2 months ago Reply

I got such great feedback on 'Suicide Watch' that I went ahead and posted a second chapter....

Thanks rocklee11416 for your 30 Days addition.


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1 writerwannabe 2 months ago Reply

Indeed. I added a chapter THREE to HG's Love and Bones....which Chloe promptly stomped all over...SNIFF.
Just kidding...lol.
As soon as I figure out (I really need to go back to school for a few years, first) what's going on in Le Blog...Imma gonna mash that one, too.


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1 chloe 2 months ago Reply

writer- you're funny! Sorry I should have checked that noone added a capter right before I moved mine from microsoftword to "add a chapter"-I thought I was pretty speedy on that one- oh well- I would have enjoyed continuing yours, esp with the new fairy character- ooh I guess i still could?
Sure doesn't seem like you need to go back to school- didn't mark Twain say- i never let my schooling interfere with my education.

With Le Blog, there'll be three random words at the end which the next writer has to include in the story- Nash did a great job with:terminal velocity, bavaria, and olive oil if you read his chpt. three. happy writing.-
Chloe


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2 writerwannabe 2 months ago Reply

chloe - I'm afraid of a similar path crossing with Cheeseliker who has already stated he's working on a mash to Le Blog (nash's mash with the words - Abraham Lincoln, yellow snow and ball peen hammer). So, I'll wait to see whether he does or not.
But, the really good news is that I took a Sped Redin' course and whizzed through about a thousand and one pages of dictionary!! I fully understand Le Blog now and I'm rarin' to go...lol.
Yep, nash did a great job. He ALWAYS does a great job. I think (and this is just twixt the two of us, ok?) he's a reverse psychologist. A backwards shrink, you know? He puts all this really great writing, really profound stuff (even when he's being funny about it) out there so that all of us "normal" folk will go absolutely bat **** tryin' to figure it all out and can't admit it when we can't because, well because then everyone else'd think we were stupid or something.. you know? So, then...he lures you into mashing one of his traps. Soon as you do that, well...you've just shown yourself to be inadequate to the task (most of us) and then, finally (I'm getting there) he offers up a round of critique and comment that will baffle your baffles and while your tearing your hair out, half way around the world, he'll be neatly penning into his little yellow book with the purple polka-dots....got that sucker again!!! LMAO.
What I'm trying to do is reach the limit for words or characters in each comment box. I'm tired of it now, though, so...adios! :o)


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2 chloe 2 months ago Reply

Haha! He is a force to be reckoned with- his critiques alone are literary masterpieces- but don't worry- we're all just here to let off a little creative steam- I'm just happy if anyone pays me the compliment of mashing one of mine!

I hope someone picks up "The bank robbers"- (you can find chapter three under my name and backtrack) he-be (sorry @ spelling?) did the best chapter four- sort of international thriller!


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2 wolfram 2 months ago Reply

Hey guys, Nash had asked that we limit this thread to announcing continuations. So let's try and keep the post contents here to a minimum so folks can simply check in and check out.
On topic, I've substantially revised my chapter 2 draft on "The Truth About Mr. Dooley" and will be publishing tomorrow so proofreads and comments are welcome. Thanks.


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1 Cheeseliker 2 months ago Reply

I added to 'There's a Hair-O in my Sombrero', which is the same storyline as Nash's Le Blog one.


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2 nashvillebecker 2 months ago Reply

Nice addy, Cheese. Enjoyed it. For an even sillier branch, I added a chapter 3 to The Awakener by mybeautifuldaydream and Polonius.


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1 Cheeseliker 2 months ago Reply

Addition to The Final Step. Not a great chapter but advances the storyline.


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1 makoallen 1 month, 4 weeks ago Reply

Added to "Cure" by Deloris!


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1 theblackhand 1 month, 4 weeks ago Reply

I posted a chapter 2 draft for 'Harvest'.
Tell me what you guys think....


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1 wolfram 1 month, 4 weeks ago Reply

Added a chapter 2 to Cheeseliker's "Bad Apple".
Also, (finally) published Chapter 2 on "The Truth About Mr. Dooley".
Comments and votes appreciated.


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1 Cheeseliker 1 month, 3 weeks ago Reply

Added a chapter 4 to a storyline I started a while back. The chapters go like this:
Running(me)-Taken(me)-Taken:Discovery(wwb)
and the new one by me: Discovery:Hesitation.
Please take a look, its a decent little story so far in my opinion.


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2 wolfram 1 month, 3 weeks ago Reply

You can tack on chapter 5 - "Deliberation" after Cheeseliker's "Discovery:Hesitation". Yeah, I mashed on it. Now quit dallying and read the story from the beginning, and maybe mash on it too. (It's worth it.)


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1 theblackhand 1 month, 3 weeks ago Reply

I just posted a re-edited chpt of 'Harvest'and the last October Chill chpt of 'Devil's Night' a few days ago...


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1 honeygloom 1 month, 3 weeks ago Reply

I finished off Elevatormusic's OC storyline;)


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1 theblackhand 1 month, 3 weeks ago Reply

I added a 2nd chapter to 'When Night Things Come Calling,' by marcusgregory....

Also a draft for a story I am working on called 'The Picture Frame....'


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1 morrigana 1 month, 3 weeks ago Reply

Added a chapter 2, Unheard of precedence, to Time Served, http://storymash.com/u/chloe/kekesole/


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1 Cheeseliker 1 month, 3 weeks ago Reply

Just added to the storyline I was talking about before, adding a chapter after wwb's. Its getting good guys, you should check it out. It's titled 'Torture'.


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1 Josh9585 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

I've added four additional chapter to Eternal Soul since I originally posted the prologue. Some of the chapters were too long so I had to split them in half. Does anyone know how to make it so that when pasting from Word to this site, it doesn't lose things like indentations, new lines for separate paragraphs, and italics? I've been doing it all manually but what a pain.


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1 nashvillebecker 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

Finally added a second chapter to wsells' "ADVANTAGE - Chapter One "Wronged." (the Cons On Call storyline.)


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1 nashvillebecker 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

I published a final chapter to Cheese's "Running" storyline. I say "A" final chapter, since other people are welcome to continue it along a different line if they so desire.


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1 nashvillebecker 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

...and, because they didn't post it here...

dogdeity added three chapters and an ending to Toby's storyline (you'll have to go via his profile, since for some reason they're not on the regular chapter tree).

wsells continued the ConsOnCall storyline with "Off to Shooter"


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1 hebe6405 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

I added a chapter to Themagnopen's "The Tale of the Sentry and the Old Sequoia Tree"


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1 nashvillebecker 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

I tagged ConsOnCall again. And after three chapters in two days, I'll see you folks again next week.


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1 wsells 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

CoC updated with "Tit for Tat"


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2 Cheeseliker 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

Added to the The Bank Robber's storyline. Check it out, mystery and intrigue abound!


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1 nashvillebecker 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

CoC has two more chapters.


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1 rmburns 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

Added Chapter Two - Lady Gray onto Societus. Enjoy!


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2 Cheeseliker 1 month, 1 week ago Reply

Added to CoC. Hope its up to par with the other chapters.


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1 wsells 1 month, 1 week ago Reply

It is - you poor soul. I had expected better :-)
Added to CoC too.


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1 nashvillebecker 1 month, 1 week ago Reply

CoC is up for grabs until Monday, as I installed my last chapter for the week a moment ago.


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1 Cheeseliker 1 month, 1 week ago Reply

Another addition to CoC.


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2 purplesea 1 month, 1 week ago Reply

Hi. Have published chapter 2 (Not So Fast) of Hits and Misses. Great job everyone! Your stories inspire me to be a better writer. =)


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1 Jenny7777 1 month ago Reply

Published chapter 3 of Honey! :)


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1 crystalfoo 1 month ago Reply

I added a chapter to CoC--Seek and Destroy. Foo


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1 nashvillebecker 1 month ago Reply

CoC grew again. I'm to blame.


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1 Cheeseliker 1 month ago Reply

Bad Apple has a third and perhaps final disturbing chapter.


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1 Aggeloi 1 month ago Reply

Published 2nd chapter to Dalliances. Let me know what you think! :)


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2 nashvillebecker 1 month ago Reply

Published an addition to beanpolewatson's "How to Speak Penguineese and Interstellar Poultry Ettiquitte." Fun story.


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1 shadinah 1 month ago Reply

Added a chapter 3 to Dirty Laundry. I'm hoping someone will mash it, as I'm not sure where it's going at this point. :P


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2 nashvillebecker 1 month ago Reply

Two more Penguin chapters added, #4 by BPW, #6 by me. It may look like #5, but it's not.


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2 wolfram 1 month ago Reply

I wrapped a hanky around my walking stick and hopped on the Penguin train. What's that weird smell?


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1 theblackhand 1 month ago Reply

I published a second chapter to mybeautifuldaydream's "Man in the Headlights."


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1 writerwannabe 1 month ago Reply

Dang...now, I find it...lol. I couldn't earlier so I posted what should have gone here, separately. "New Posting".


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1 Eternal_Flame 1 month ago Reply

This is a great forum! Great idea! I just posted a second chapter to Barro City (called The Quercus)...which I would love feedback on.

I am also really hoping people will Mash "Behind Door Number One" which is essentially a story I created specifically for mashing...


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1 Cheeseliker 1 month ago Reply

The Red Brockton Community Theatre storyline now has an additional chapter.


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1 Cheeseliker 4 weeks, 1 day ago Reply

As does the humorous scifi adventure that includes really long chapter titles and penguins. Yes, I said penguins.


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1 shadinah 4 weeks, 1 day ago Reply

I'm finally done experimenting with pink liqiuds. CoC has a new chapter.


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1 wsells 3 weeks, 6 days ago Reply

working on next CoC install


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1 LadyAdelia 3 weeks, 6 days ago Reply

I just added the blue door to "behind door number one"


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1 writerwannabe 3 weeks ago Reply

Published Mañana Can Wait - The Story Revisited. I initially published the lyrics to the song and then thought I'd turn into a real story, publishing Mañana Can Wait - The Story. Fabulous comments from nash, HG, PEPPZ and wsells led me to revise...thus, MCW - The Story Revisited. Hey, Dog...thanks for the truly encouraging comments!!


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1 farty 3 weeks ago Reply

I put up additions to "Booty Shorts" (Farty Shorts) and "Ricker and Troy ****" (Ricker and Troy Fart). But they aren't real chapters. I only put them up because those two are the worst stories on here. It will take you two minutes to read them, which you should only do if you like fart humor.


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1 wsells 2 weeks, 2 days ago Reply

Cancel last (1 week 3 days ago) Can't continue. Projects to do. On leave/gone fish'n/later baby. Bye all and all the best.


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1 nashvillebecker 2 weeks, 2 days ago Reply

New chapter on Penguin is up.


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1 drmarcelluscrum 2 weeks, 1 day ago Reply

If you haven't checked it out, come check out the first 2 chapters of Tablet 13: Diplomatic Destruction.

The fear in souls of mortals weakens them, power hungry dictators and traitorous leaders are but one flaw in the world of Angeanus. A never ending political war continues, the taste of blood lingers in the hearts of those who seek domination and laws enacted in ages long since pasted will reek havoc against its writers. Come take part in the lives of five souls (Thay Cyos, Nita, Senator Qweb Nark, Captain Dra Stone and Axel) as they embark on a voyage unknown and unpredicted through an ever changing world filled with mystical creatures, magic, romance and death. The House of Eden tries to hold the Five Kingdoms of Thathious together, but it seems that it is about to meet a diplomatic destruction.

I think you will like it, Dr. Marcellus Crum


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2 nashvillebecker 1 week, 6 days ago Reply

Dos nuevo chapteros on los penguinos estas alli.


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1 Wandering_Rian 1 week, 6 days ago Reply

I added a chapter, with much apologies to Nash, to the wonderful story Rainy Days and Mondays. I needed to write something that wasn't in my comfort zone and his story was too good to be left alone.

It was painful because I wanted to twist it to the dark side and telling it in present tense was a killer. Total killer.

I hope I didn't mess it up too badly and thank you Nash for a great toy to play with.


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1 nashvillebecker 1 week, 2 days ago Reply

Another chapter three, with no apologies to Rian, to Rainy Days and Mondays has been added.


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1 Wandering_Rian 1 week ago Reply

I have added a Chapter to whatever it is that my "Daniel's Tale" is turning into. And I think since it is over 3000 words, I owe whoever reads it an apology. LOL.


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1 djinndarme 5 days, 22 hours ago Reply

The next installment of the Medias epic saga is up. You'll have to go to Chapter 4 "An Ominous Journey" to find "Crossing the Rubicon" it until it posts to the Projects page.


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1 ladyvike15 5 days, 9 hours ago Reply

I have added a new chapter to Midnight's Protectors. It's a starter for a longer book. Check it out.


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1 Wandering_Rian 5 days, 1 hour ago Reply

The next bit of "Chasing the Stolen Bride" is up.

Having a lot of fun with it


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1 Wandering_Rian 4 days, 22 hours ago Reply

And another bit of Rainy Days and Mondays is up. Not as much fun with that one. It fought me every step of the way.


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1 dkk4510 4 days, 22 hours ago Reply

So far I have 4 parts to Mud and Souls if anyone one is inerested... also am currently writting the second part to ~Shattering Loss~, I'll announce when posted.


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1 LadyLuck 3 days, 21 hours ago Reply

I wrote a chapter two to dkk4510's "Hades' Daughter" titled "A Daughter's Search". I hope I did it justice as my first addition to this wonderful site.


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1 LadyLuck 3 days, 21 hours ago Reply

I just wrote a chapter 2 to "Hades' Daughter" written by dkk4510. It is titled "A Daughter's Search", I hope I did it some justice as my first addition to this wonderful site.


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2 Cheeseliker 1 day, 4 hours ago Reply

Put up an addition to Wolfram's Cop Out which itself is an addition to A Brilliant Idea by Beanpole which itself is an addition to Trouble. Intense, action-filled, and short, it is an excellent storyline to read in five minutes and then spend a couple minutes contributing. Check it out.


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2 dkk4510 1 day, 4 hours ago Reply

Posted ~Shattering Loss:2~ Already have some comments, thank you.


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1 wolfram 9 hours, 24 minutes ago Reply

Added "Stalled" to the fun "Trouble" storyline originated by Suicide Jack, with contributions by Cheeseliker and Beanpolewatson.


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